I feel I did well in supporting my main topics and having the sources to back up my information for my draft. I also feel that I have made it fairly easy for my audience to understand what I am trying to say without them having to decipher what I’m meaning. In the sections I think need more work I hope to do my best to support my topics with factual evidence and make it easy for people to understand my ideas. Now as for the section in my draft I think needs improvement I would say arguing my topic from the opposing viewpoint is where my draft needs the most work. I feel that this section needs work because I find it difficult to talk about my topic from the opposing viewpoint because I don’t agree with it. So, I am doing my best to be as unbiased as I can be, but I have found it hard to do. In my revision process, I will be using both instructor and peer feedback to be able to revise my paper successfully. 

For your response posts, address the following:

1. Offer a tip or strategy to help your peers revise the sections they mentioned in their initial post. Use the Module Five and Six readings or your own experience to support your recommendations.

Remember, this assignment is graded on the quality of your initial post and at least two response posts to your classmates.